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Creating a plot for the 1.3 Community Project: ENDED

Started by VSMIT, August 22, 2009, 01:55:02 PM

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What would you like in the CP?

3rd Cthonian faction
15 (78.9%)
Relativistic time travel
5 (26.3%)
Direct time travel
8 (42.1%)
Cerberi enemies
10 (52.6%)
Cthonian enemies
15 (78.9%)
Time Paradox loops
4 (21.1%)

Total Members Voted: 19

Mr X

Quote from: Clavin12 on September 15, 2009, 01:33:02 PM
except for the main character because he escapes with the help of the Phosphorii.

He dies because he is alone on a non-life supporting planet in the ancient past.

Quote from: Clavin12 on September 15, 2009, 01:33:02 PM
How does it fit in with FE if all the Cthonians die?

I said all of those involved,

it isn't the case that every single Cthonian is on the planet that gets destroyed.

The point is that no record of the incident ever survives. The Cthonians of both main factions on the planet are only a small fraction of the race as a whole.

Quote from: AHadley on September 15, 2009, 01:57:12 PM
Only one change I want to make from that, which is that the scions already have the drive built into the Ark III. This will make things fit with Perfidious. I don't destroy the Cerberi. But, as my plans are at the moment, the allied races find an Acclubierre drive amongst Cerberi tech at the end.

Maybe the Scions just receive the distress call targeted at them by the Phosphornii, who somehow (dont give an explanation) knew they would get the drive.

Not a bad idea, and of course it could be revealed that at the end its you who sends the message.
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bigbadbogie

Maybe Adam and Eve could be included, but they don't end up on ancient Earth.

They could end up on some distant alien planet and instead of mankind evolving from them... something much bigger did.
Others would merely say it was good humour.


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iron maiden

QuoteMaybe Adam and Eve could be included, but they don't end up on ancient Earth.

They could end up on some distant alien planet and instead of mankind evolving from them... something much bigger did.

sounds good to me
So we only get one chance can we take it
And we only get one life can't exchange it
Can we hold on to what we have don't replace it
The age of innocence is fading..... Like an old dream

bb1

I believe that would be scrap pool's jurisdiction for that part...

Nielk1

Quote from: bb1 on September 15, 2009, 03:51:02 PM
I believe that would be scrap pool's jurisdiction for that part...

The person who makes an idea is not required to dismiss it.

Click on the image...

bigbadbogie

#80
Yeah. One of the rules of the CP is that the story belongs to everyone... and anyone can change it.
Others would merely say it was good humour.


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AHadley

Quote from: Mr X on September 15, 2009, 02:55:10 PM
Not a bad idea, and of course it could be revealed that at the end its you who sends the message.

Yes, I like it!

And BBB, I think we should stick with the original time loop really...

Mr X

Quote from: bigbadbogie on September 15, 2009, 08:31:30 PM
Yeah. One of the rules of the CP is that the story belong to everyone... and anyone can change it.

Provided that enough people agree of course.
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Nielk1

Quote from: Mr X on September 16, 2009, 11:58:37 AM
Provided that enough people agree of course.

NO!

#1 - Majority.
#2 - Leader gets sick of it and writes it for you all.

Those are the two possibilities.

Click on the image...

Feared_1

And it's going to be written for you if no one starts working on it!

Clavin12

That's what we've been doing for the last several posts. Getting our main story points straight.
C l a v i n 1 2

iron maiden

if someone can please work out and finalize the main idea's to the story i will start writing the main plot. Please someone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So we only get one chance can we take it
And we only get one life can't exchange it
Can we hold on to what we have don't replace it
The age of innocence is fading..... Like an old dream

Clavin12

Here are some possible main points.

Protagonist: Scion Ambassador (not named yet)

Antagonist: Cthonians, that you happen to be caught in the middle of, trying to get at the newly discovered biometal.

Major Struggle: You trying to get back to your time.
C l a v i n 1 2

AHadley


bb1

He was human, though, right?

Nielk, #2 generally ends up more successful than #1... see last CP attempt for details.